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VW Cristiano Bianci DRAFT

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The first (even though I posted Dante's draft first) of the character arts, the main character, Cristiano "Chris Vicious" Bianci, doing what he does best--getting a good smoke after beating someone's face in. :lol: Anyway, this doubles as both Chris' character art as well as the title image, as roughed into the background. I plan to implement the things I drew in with my notes. :slow:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Mmmki, I know this is rough, so I'll stick to the basics:

Right now his center of balance is off. Yes, he IS leaning against a wall, but you haven't done anything to deform his clothes / hair to make that clearer. If you could fix that issue to make it more obvious he's leaning into a corner and/or move that left leg over a little, he'd look a lot less likely to fall over, and as a bonus you'll eliminate that feminine silhouette you have in his legs. Adding a little more thickness to the pants wouldn't hurt either.

That's the worst of what I see here, so keep going!